Monday, February 23, 2009

Swimming

I went swimming. The first thing I did I got dressed then I wooked ov to the swimming pool. then I kide I went in lane One I got lots ov reing I got a kicked my legs. I went diving into the pool I got to go first.

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  1. You worked very hard on this story, Jack! Well done! Don't forget to reread your writing to check it all makes sense next time. I like the way you remembered those full stops!

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