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Welcome to Room 27's writing blog. We are a Year 2 class at Meadowbank School in Auckland, New Zealand. We hope you enjoy reading some of our stories, which we have written independently. Our teacher will have read our work and may have left a comment, but will not have marked it. Please feel free to leave us any comments or questions that you may have too!
Well done for remembering some of the things you needed to make a worm farm! Don't forget to split your writing into sentences next time. I'm impressed with how you logged onto the blog independently!
ReplyDeleteI think Willow has done really well. She just needs to change 'a empty base' to 'an empty base.'
ReplyDeleteYou did well but you nedid to put the wruod ned betwen you and papr.
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