Sunday, April 5, 2009

My weekend

On Satday after breakfast I went to the school gala. The first thin I did was riding on a big house it was black. Next we had a walk around. The sekid rid I did was a rid that you haddid to get a drink boattel and a man polsz you when you get the boattel. That rid was fun I got wet. Then I got a drink.

3 comments:

  1. Well done for using some time connectives, Thomas! It sounds like you had a fun weekend!

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  2. lots of writting good job

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  3. what was the drinks name

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